Jacks little adventure

PART 1
Living in a healthy river.

Once upon a time there was an Eel named Jack who lived in the beautiful  healthy Omaru River. Jack loved to swim and play with his family in the River. One day he noticed the crystal clear water of the river was starting to look dirty. Jack saw lots of people throwing rubbish into the river it was  dirty and smelly it was  uninhabitable for Jack and his family. Jack needed to find a way to clean up the river so he would be able to live in the crystal clear water.

PART 2 
Jack did not survive.

So Jack  followed the creek looking for a way to clean Omaru River. Suddenly Jack realised that he was swimming into the Sea  Jack  hated saltwater, it made his eyes burn. He  was so hungry that he could not take it  anymore. He turned around to  go back but it was too late and sadly, Jack died. After a  while a man picked up Jack’s family. Luckily,  his family was saved by the man because he took them to his house and put them in a big clean pond where they could live forever. In the meantime Jack turned into a ghost and followed his family to the mans house  and they lived happily ever after.

That is all I have for you lovely people good bye and have a good day. I hope you have enjoyed reading my story.