persuasive writing

Why year 8 students from Pt England school should attend Tamaki college when they are finish year 8

I think that all children from Pt England school should attend Tanki College because you don’t have to worry about buying a new netbook or chromebook. Tamaki college is also in the manaiakalani cluster so your child will know what is happening like if there is the manaiakalani film festival they will know what to do and when to do it.

Pt England year 8 are always going to Tamaki college for technology so they know more about Tamaki college more than other colleges. The have more experience at tamaki college another reason to you should go to Tamaki college   is because it is close it is just next to the Pt England School.

This was my persuasive writing and these were the reasons to why i think that all children from Pt England School should attend tamaki college.